A grammar check of a description about dry grasslands such as the Great Steppe of Eurasia and American prairies, explained simply for 12-year-olds.
Let's look at your sentence and correct the grammar step by step:
Your original sentence: "This illustration is to show dry grasslands (the Great Steppe of Eurasia and American prairies). These biomes ae known for very little rain, lack of trees and strong dry winds, as well as sand storms."
Corrections:
Corrected version:
"This illustration shows dry grasslands (the Great Steppe of Eurasia and the American prairies). These biomes are known for very little rain, a lack of trees, strong dry winds, and sandstorms."
Here’s what was changed:
If you want, you can also combine the sentences like this:
"This illustration shows dry grasslands, such as the Great Steppe of Eurasia and the American prairies, which are known for very little rain, a lack of trees, strong dry winds, and sandstorms."
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