Grammar Check for a Sentence About Electric Rays for 6-Year-Olds

A simple grammar check and explanation for the sentence about electric rays hunting by shocking fish, suitable for a 6-year-old.

The sentence you wrote is mostly correct! Here's the sentence:

Electric rays hunt by shocking the approaching fish with electricity.

It means that electric rays catch fish by giving them a shock with their electricity. The grammar is good, but if you want it to sound a little smoother, you could say:

  • Electric rays hunt by shocking fish that come close to them with electricity.
  • Electric rays hunt by using electricity to shock fish that approach.

Both are correct, but your original sentence is clear and gramatically correct!

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