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The sentence you wrote is almost correct! Here's a slightly better version:

Original: When a grain of sand gets inside an oyster’s shell, it is covered with many shiny layers and turns into a big pearl.

Corrected: When a grain of sand gets inside an oyster’s shell, it is covered with many shiny layers and turns into a big pearl.

Actually, your sentence is already good! If you want, you can also say:

When a grain of sand gets inside an oyster’s shell, the oyster covers it with many shiny layers, and it turns into a big pearl.

Both sentences explain the pearl-making process clearly and are grammatically correct!

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