Learn how to correctly write a sentence about axolotls breathing underwater with gills, tailored for a 4-year-old’s understanding.
The sentence you wrote is mostly correct but can be made a little clearer and simpler for a 4-year-old. Here's the corrected sentence:
To breathe underwater, the axolotl has gills that look like feathery branches on its head.
This sentence is already good because it clearly explains how the axolotl breathes underwater using gills that look like feathery branches.
If you want, you can also say it this way for simplicity:
The axolotl breathes underwater with gills that look like feathery branches on its head.
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