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The original sentence you wrote is:

Many animals store seeds and fruit for the winter. Squirrels often forget where they made their stashes, and the buried seeds start to grow.

Here's a corrected and smoother version:

Many animals store seeds and fruit for the winter. Squirrels often forget where they hid their stashes, and the buried seeds start to grow.

Explanation:

  • Instead of "made their stashes," it is better to say "hid their stashes" because animals hide or bury seeds rather than 'make' them.
  • The rest of the sentence is correct and clear!

So the corrected sentence is: "Many animals store seeds and fruit for the winter. Squirrels often forget where they hid their stashes, and the buried seeds start to grow."


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