Your original sentence has a great concept but could be improved for clarity and flow. Here's a corrected and polished version:
Original: A truly innovative take on learning with fun, each board in our educational board series comes with advanced touch technology that makes every image come to life.
Revised: Our educational board series offers a truly innovative and fun approach to learning. Each board features advanced touch technology that brings every image to life.
This revision improves readability by splitting the sentence into two parts, adds parallel structure ('innovative and fun approach'), and uses 'brings' instead of 'makes' for a smoother expression.