Hi Camilla, the message you wrote is very clear and friendly! Here are a few small improvements to make it perfect:
- Change "a quick line" to "just a quick note" because it's more common in emails.
- Instead of "(see the bank slip attached)", write "(please see the attached bank slip)" for a smoother tone.
- In the sentence "Sorry it took a bit longer than expected!", you can say "Sorry it took a bit longer than expected." with a period to keep it professional yet friendly.
- In the last sentence, add a comma after "Have a great summer ahead" before the smiley to separate the phrases better.
Here's the corrected version:
Hi Matt,
Just a quick note to let you know we've made the payment (please see the attached bank slip). Sorry it took a bit longer than expected.
It's been a pleasure working with you! Have a great summer ahead, :)
Best wishes,
Camilla