Learn how to correct and understand a sentence about tits visiting feeders in winter, explained simply for young learners.
Let's look at your sentence: "When winter snow covers everything, tits fly to the feeders to enjoy some yummy seeds and lard."
The sentence is almost perfect! Just a small change will make it sound better:
Corrected sentence: "When winter snow covers everything, tits fly to the feeders to enjoy some yummy seeds and lard."
Actually, the sentence is correct, but the word "tits" might be confusing because it has another meaning. To be clear, you can say "blue tits" or "little tits," which are small birds.
So, you can say: "When winter snow covers everything, blue tits fly to the feeders to enjoy some yummy seeds and lard." That way, it's clear you're talking about the birds!