Let's look at your sentences about seabirds and make them even better!
Your original sentences:
Seabirds eat fish, so they spend most of their lives flying over following fish in the sea. They also spend time on land where they come together in groups to find food and keep their little ones safe.
Here are a few suggestions:
- First sentence: "flying over following fish in the sea" is a bit confusing. It seems like you want to say they fly over the sea following fish. So, you can say: "They spend most of their lives flying over the sea, following fish." Adding a comma helps make it clearer.
- Second sentence: This sentence is almost perfect! But, you can add a comma before "where" to separate the ideas: "They also spend time on land, where they come together in groups to find food and keep their little ones safe."
So, the corrected version looks like this:
"Seabirds eat fish, so they spend most of their lives flying over the sea, following fish. They also spend time on land, where they come together in groups to find food and keep their little ones safe."
Great job describing seabirds! Keep practicing!