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The sentence you provided is mostly correct but can be improved slightly for clarity and flow.

Original sentence: An albatross spends most of its life soaring high above the ocean. Every year, it comes back to the shore where it was born to hatch chicks.

Suggested revision: An albatross spends most of its life soaring high above the ocean. Every year, it comes back to the shore where it was born to lay eggs and hatch chicks.

Explanation:

  • Adding "to lay eggs and hatch chicks" makes it clearer what the albatross does at the shore.
  • Alternatively, you could say: "Every year, it returns to the shore where it was born to raise its chicks." This is also clear and natural.


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