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Your sentence is very clear and easy to understand, but it can be made a little better by fixing grammar and adding a little more detail.

Corrected sentence: In winter, people hang bird feeders to give birds food and help them stay strong.

Explanation:

  • Instead of saying and keep them strong, it's better to say help them stay strong because keep needs an object that shows what is being kept.
  • Help them stay strong clearly shows the purpose of giving food to birds.
  • Everything else in your sentence is good!

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