The sentence you wrote is mostly good! It says: "In spring, male wood grouses fan their tails and make loud noises. This show never fails to get female attention."
To make it a little clearer and more grammatically correct, I suggest a small change:
Corrected sentence: "In spring, male wood grouses fan their tails and make loud noises. This display never fails to get the attention of females."
Here's why:
- It's better to use the word "display" instead of "show" here, because it means a special behavior to attract mates.
- Adding "the" before "attention" and saying "the attention of females" makes the idea clearer.
Great effort! Keep practicing sentences like this.