Grammar Check for a Sentence About Beavers for a 6-Year-Old

The original sentences are mostly clear but can be combined and slightly improved for smoother reading. Here is a corrected version:

"The beaver builds its home from sticks and clay. The lodge sits on the water, and beavers dive underwater to get inside."

Explanation:

• "The beaver builds its home from sticks and clay." – This sentence is grammatically correct.
• "The lodge sits on the water." – Also correct; it tells where the home is.
• "Beavers dive to get inside." – We added "underwater" for clarity, since the lodge is on the water, and diving means going beneath the water surface.

You can also combine the ideas into a single sentence for better flow:

"The beaver builds its home from sticks and clay. The lodge sits on the water, and beavers dive underwater to get inside."