Let's look at the sentences you wrote:
"Squirrels gather mushrooms and dry them on the branches. Nuts and acorns they find get buried in the ground or tucked away in tree hollows."
These sentences are mostly correct! But to make them even clearer and smoother, you could say:
- First sentence: "Squirrels gather mushrooms and dry them on the branches." This is perfect!
- Second sentence: "Nuts and acorns they find get buried in the ground or tucked away in tree hollows." To make it clearer, you can say: "Nuts and acorns that they find get buried in the ground or tucked away in tree hollows." Adding "that" helps connect the ideas better.
So the improved version is:
"Squirrels gather mushrooms and dry them on the branches. Nuts and acorns that they find get buried in the ground or tucked away in tree hollows."
Great job! Keep up the good work writing about nature.