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Here is a grammatically improved version of your instructions:

"Use nearly one page of the spread to show a side view of a child’s head (photo) alongside a drawing of the brain with its parts highlighted. You may choose to use different colours or varying shades of the same colour to distinguish the brain parts."

Explanation of the correction:

  • Changed "photo) and a brain drawing" to "photo) alongside a drawing of the brain" for smoother flow and clarity.
  • Replaced "different shades of the same colour" with "varying shades of the same colour" for natural expression.
  • Added "to distinguish the brain parts" to clarify the purpose of using different colours or shades.

This version is clearer and grammatically correct, suitable for instructions regarding the visual project for a 6-year-old student.


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