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Your sentence is almost perfect! Here's a slightly improved version with corrected punctuation to make it clearer:

Some tropical birds, like dressy peacocks and scary shoebills, have striking looks. Others have cool talents: hummingbirds can fly upside down and backwards, and cassowaries are speedy runners.

The main change was adding a comma before and cassowaries to separate the two ideas clearly. Great job!


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