Let's look at the sentence: "On cold snowy days, tits happily stop by the feeders to enjoy some yummy fat and seeds."
The sentence is mostly correct, but we can improve its clarity slightly. Here's what to notice:
- "cold snowy days" — This is good; it describes the type of days.
- "tits" — This is the name of a small bird, which is okay here.
- "happily stop by the feeders" — This sounds good; it means the birds come to the feeders happily.
- "to enjoy some yummy fat and seeds." — This phrase is understandable. We usually say "some yummy fat" if referring to a fat ball or similar bird food. But it might be clearer to say "some yummy fat balls and seeds" or "some yummy fat and some seeds." Also, "fat" is usually plural in this context as "fat balls."
Here is a slightly corrected version:
"On cold, snowy days, tits happily stop by the feeders to enjoy some yummy fat balls and seeds."
Notice the comma between "cold" and "snowy" (because they're two adjectives), and "fat balls" is a common term for bird food.
So, the sentence is good, just a couple of small tweaks can make it clearer!