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Your sentence is almost correct! Here's a small change to make it sound better:

Original sentence: The kestrel flaps its wings fast to hang in the air and then it swoops down on a mouse.

Corrected sentence: The kestrel flaps its wings quickly to hang in the air, and then it swoops down on a mouse.

Explanation: Instead of 'fast,' we use 'quickly' to describe how the kestrel flaps its wings. Also, we add a comma before 'and' to connect the two actions more smoothly.


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