The sentence you provided is almost perfect, but here is a grammatically correct and clear version:
Look at all these toys! Some are soft, some can play music, and some you can wind up to make them move! What should you choose?
Explanation:
- Added a comma after 'music' to separate the list correctly.
- Added 'make them move' after 'wind up' for clarity.
- Changed 'What to choose?' to 'What should you choose?' for proper question structure.