Let's look at your sentence and make it clearer and grammatically correct:
Original: "We normally use an artboard size +30% of the page make-up (see the layout), which makes the final artboard size (bleeding included): 1453Ñ…249"
Corrected version: "We normally use an artboard size that is 30% larger than the page make-up (see the layout), which makes the final artboard size (including the bleed): 1453 x 249."
Here's why:
- "+30%" is changed to "30% larger than" to express the increase more clearly.
- "page make-up" could mean the design area, which we kept as is because it's likely part of the specific jargon.
- We added "that is" to connect the ideas and make the sentence smoother.
- "bleeding included" is better said as "including the bleed" for clarity.
- The multiplication sign is corrected to a regular 'x' with spaces around it for readability.
So, the improved sentence is much easier to understand!