Two kid-friendly rephrases for an 8-year-old: notes about sketch adjustments

Two simple, friendly rephrasings for an 8-year-old explaining that rough changes were made to a sketch to help them understand feedback and that they can redraw it however they like.

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Option 1: We hope our quick changes to your drawing help you understand our notes. Please feel free to redraw it the way you think looks nicer and more correct.

Option 2: We made some simple fixes to your sketch to show our ideas. You can change your drawing however you think looks best and right.

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