Here are two clear, friendly ways to say that message to a 13-year-old. Pick the one that sounds best to you.
- Option 1: We made a few quick changes to your sketch to make our notes easier to understand. Please feel free to redraw it however you think looks better, clearer, or more accurate.
- Option 2: We added rough edits to your sketch so our feedback is clearer. Use them as a guide and redraw the parts you want to improve to make the final drawing more beautiful and correct.
Tip: Use Option 1 if you want a casual, friendly tone. Use Option 2 if you prefer a slightly more instructional tone.