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Corrected sentence:

Rescue machines are always ready to help. Whether on the ground, in the sky, or on the water, they will find you.

Simpler version (even easier to read):

Rescue machines are always ready to help. They will find you on land, in the sky, or on the water.

Why this is good (easy steps):

  • We use two short sentences so it is clear and simple.
  • Using "Whether" shows the three places as choices: ground, sky, or water.
  • We put a comma after the introductory phrase (the "Whether..." part) to make the sentence easy to understand.
  • "They will find you" is correct — the verb matches the subject "machines."

Original sentence was mostly okay, but these small changes make it clearer for young readers.


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