Corrected sentence
Hop on buses and trams, and ride in cars to zip around the city. We all follow the rules to stay safe.
Why we changed it — explained step by step
- Lowercase "city" — only write City with a capital letter if it's the name of a place (for example, "New York City"). Otherwise use a small c: city.
- Add a comma — put a comma after "trams" when you list things. It makes the sentence easier to read.
- Use "ride in cars" — we usually say "hop on" for buses and trams, but for cars we say "ride in" or "get into" because you sit inside a car.
- Second sentence is good — "We all follow the rules to stay safe." is clear and correct.
Quick tip for a 7-year-old
Think: you hop on things you step onto (bus, tram). You get into or ride in things you sit inside (car).
Another short version
Hop on buses and trams, ride in cars, and follow the rules to stay safe.