Great sentence! Here is a clear, correct version and easy steps to understand the changes.
Original: take buses, trams and cars to zip around the City. We all follow the rules to stay safe.
Corrected: We take buses, trams, and cars to zip around the city. We all follow the rules to stay safe.
- Start with a capital letter. Sentences begin with a big letter: "We" instead of "we" if it starts the sentence.
- Use a comma in a list. When you name three things, put a comma between the second and third: "buses, trams, and cars." (This comma is okay to use and makes the list clear.)
- Lowercase common words. "City" is not a special name here, so use a small letter: "city." Use a big letter only if it's a name like "New York City."
- Keep the safe rule sentence. "We all follow the rules to stay safe." is correct and easy to understand.
If you like a slightly different style, you can also say: "We zip around the city in buses, trams, and cars, and we follow the rules to stay safe." But the corrected version above is short and clear.