Grammar check for a 4-year-old: "A bison has very thick fur that keeps rain off"

Simple, child-friendly grammar check and tiny improvements for the sentence about a bison's fur. Shows the preferred wording and a short explanation suitable for a 4-year-old.

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Yes — your sentence is good! A slightly more natural way is:

A bison has very thick fur that keeps the rain off.

This means the bison's fur makes the rain roll away so its skin stays dry. If you are talking about bison in general (not just one), you can say:

Bison have very thick fur that keeps the rain off.

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