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Correct sentence:

Pumas hunt at night and can carry prey that weigh up to five times as much as they do.

Why this is better (easy steps):

  • "Prey" can mean more than one animal, so we use the plural verb weigh (not weighs).
  • Saying "weigh up to five times as much as they do" clearly compares the weight of the prey with the puma. The original phrase "than their weight" sounds awkward.
  • Example to show "five times": if a puma weighs 30 kg, prey five times as heavy would weigh 150 kg (30 × 5 = 150).

Simple alternative: Pumas hunt at night and can carry animals that weigh five times as much as they do.


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