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Corrected sentence:

Stars are very far apart, but sometimes they seem to line up. Long ago, people connected the stars to make pictures called constellations.

Why this is clearer:

  • "Sometimes" shows that the stars only look lined up at times, not always.
  • "Connected the stars" is short and easy to understand.
  • "Make pictures called constellations" explains what people did and gives the name.

Your original sentences were mostly correct — these small changes just make the meaning a little clearer for a 7-year-old reader.


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