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Nice sentence! Here is a clearer, correct way to write it:

Corrected: People imagine pictures by joining the stars in the sky. Those pictures are called constellations.

Why this is better (in simple words):

  • Start with a capital letter: use 'People' not 'people'.
  • Put a period at the end of each sentence so the reader knows the sentence is finished.
  • Say 'the stars' to show you mean the stars in the sky.
  • Use 'Those pictures' instead of 'They' so it is clear what you mean.

Great job talking about the stars! You can also say one short sentence: 'Constellations are pictures people make by joining stars.'


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