Original: Pelicans love fish. They scoop it with their huge bills and carry in a pouch.
Corrected (simple): Pelicans love fish. They scoop fish up with their big bills and carry the fish in a pouch.
Why this is better (easy steps):strong>
- We say what they scoop: fish. That is the object of the action.
- Use the phrase "scoop up" to show they pick the fish out of the water.
- Say who or what is being carried: the fish. Every action needs an object so the sentence makes sense.
You can also keep the word huge if you like: "They scoop fish up with their huge bills and carry the fish in a pouch."
Great job noticing the sentence — nice practice!