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Original: The black panther has spots. It is a cousin of a leopard after all.

Corrected (two good choices):

1) The black panther has spots. It is a cousin of the leopard, after all.

2) The black panther has spots because it is a cousin of the leopard.

Why these are better (easy steps):

  • Put a comma before the short phrase "after all" when it comes at the end: "..., after all."
  • You can say "a leopard" or "the leopard." Saying "the leopard" often means the leopard as a kind of animal (the whole species), which fits here.
  • You can also join the ideas with "because" to show the reason: that explains why the panther has spots.

Fun fact: A "black panther" is usually a very dark leopard or jaguar. The spots are still there, but they can be hard to see because the fur is so dark.


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