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Great sentence! It's almost perfect for a 6-year-old. Here is a tiny improvement and a simple explanation so you can understand why.

Original: Little cubs learn to roar like their big lion dad.

Small fix: The little cubs learn to roar like their big lion dad.

Why this is good:

  • "The little cubs" tells who we mean. Adding "The" makes the sentence sound complete.
  • "learn" is the action and it matches the plural word "cubs" (more than one cub).
  • "to roar" says what they are learning.
  • "like their big lion dad" shows they are trying to roar the same way as their daddy lion.

Extra notes:

  • You can also say: The little cubs are learning to roar like their big lion dad. That tells us the cubs are doing it right now.
  • Another simple version: Little cubs learn to roar.

Nice work — keep writing and practicing!


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