Original sentence: Turkey mums raise their chicks together, like in a cute turkey kindergarten.
Good news: your sentence is grammatically correct! Here are a few simple notes and some small ways to make it even clearer:
- Plural agreement: "mums" is plural, and it correctly uses the verb "raise" (also plural). That matches well.
- Pronoun: "their" correctly refers back to the mums.
- Comma and "like": The comma is fine because you're making a comparison. If you write the comparison as a full phrase (for example, "like they're in a cute turkey kindergarten"), the comma makes the sentence clearer.
- Word choice: "mums" is British English. In American English you would usually say "moms." You can also say "mother turkeys" to be more formal.
- Capitalization: The animal name "turkey" is only capitalized at the start of a sentence. Since yours starts the sentence, the capital T is correct.
Here are a couple of easy alternative versions you can use:
- Mother turkeys raise their chicks together, like they're in a cute turkey kindergarten.
- Turkey moms raise their chicks together, like they're in a cute turkey kindergarten. (American English)
All versions are correct — nice, cute sentence!