Both sentences are grammatically correct. Here is a simple, step-by-step check and a few clearer versions you can use.
Sentence 1 (original): The lynx is super sneaky on its soft, velvety paws.
Why it's okay:
- The subject is "the lynx."
- The verb is "is."
- "Super sneaky" tells how the lynx is.
- "On its soft, velvety paws" is a phrase that explains how it moves quietly.
Small note: "on its paws" is a little unusual but still understandable. You can make it clearer by using "with" or by explaining that it walks quietly.
Clearer versions you could use:
- The lynx is super sneaky with its soft, velvety paws.
- The lynx is super sneaky because of its soft, velvety paws.
- The lynx sneaks around quietly on its soft, velvety paws.
Sentence 2 (original): The lynx has soft pads on its paws that make it super sneaky.
Why it's okay:
- The subject is "the lynx."
- "Has" is the verb and "soft pads on its paws" tells what it has.
- "That make it super sneaky" explains what the pads do, and it refers to the pads (not the paws).
Small note: Saying "pads on its paws" repeats the idea because pads are part of paws. You can make it shorter and clearer.
Clearer versions you could use:
- The lynx has soft, velvety paw pads that help it sneak.
- The lynx has soft pads that make it very sneaky.
- The lynx can sneak easily because its paw pads are soft.
Best short choice for an 8-year-old:
- The lynx is super sneaky because of its soft, velvety paws.
If you want, tell me which version you like and I can help make it even better or add more fun words!