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Correct sentence: Tigers use their stripes to hide, and then pounce when their prey comes close.

Why this is better (easy steps):

  1. Capitalize only the first word: write "Tigers" not "TIGERS." All caps looks like shouting.
  2. Use "their prey" instead of "the prey" so it sounds natural — it means the animals the tiger hunts.
  3. Use "and then" or "when" instead of "once" — those words are simpler for this sentence.
  4. Add a small comma before "and then pounce" to make the sentence easier to read.

What "pounce" means: "Pounce" means to jump on something quickly. So the whole sentence says tigers hide with their stripes and jump quickly when the animal they want to catch comes close.


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