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Correct sentence: Tigers use their stripes to hide. Then they pounce when the prey gets closer.

Why this is better (easy steps):strong>

  1. Capitalize the first word: We write Tigers with a big T at the start of the sentence, not all caps.
  2. Make two short sentences: It is easier to understand if we say the hiding part first, then the pouncing part.
  3. Use simple words to show time: "Then they pounce when the prey gets closer" tells us when the tiger jumps.

Another short way to say it: Tigers use their stripes to hide, then they pounce when the prey comes closer.


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