Original: "Farm animals give us milk, eggs and wool. Noisy machines plow and harvest, and the garden grows veggies and fruit."
Corrected: "Farm animals give us milk, eggs, and wool. Loud machines plow fields and harvest crops. The garden grows vegetables and fruit."
Why I changed it:
- I added a comma after "eggs" to make the list look right: "milk, eggs, and wool."
- I used "loud" instead of "noisy" (both are okay) and added "fields" and "crops" so the machines have something to plow and harvest.
- I wrote "vegetables" instead of "veggies" because it is the full word, but "veggies" is fine when you talk casually.
Short version to read: "Farm animals give us milk, eggs, and wool. Loud machines plow fields and harvest crops. The garden grows vegetables and fruit."