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Here are four easy ways to say the same idea. Each sentence tells us that willow branches bend toward sunlight and that helps the tree grow fast.

  1. Willow branches lean toward the sun, so the tree grows fast.
  2. The willow's branches bend to catch the sunlight, and that helps the tree grow quickly.
  3. Because the willow reaches for sunshine with its branches, it grows quickly.
  4. Willow limbs stretch toward the sun, making the tree grow fast.

How I changed them, step by step:

  1. Find who is doing it: willow branches.
  2. Say what they do: bend, lean, reach, or stretch toward the sun.
  3. Show the result: the tree grows fast or quickly.

All four sentences mean the same thing, just using different words that are easy to understand.


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