PDF

Original sentence: Mosquitoes poke the skin with their straw-like mouth and sip blood.

Shortened sentence: Mosquitoes poke the skin with a straw mouth and drink blood.

How I changed it (step by step):

  1. I replaced "their straw-like mouth" with the shorter phrase "a straw mouth." That removes extra words and the hyphen.
  2. I changed "sip" to "drink" so the verb matches the plural subject and keeps the sentence natural.

Character counts: original = 67 characters; new = 60 characters. That makes the new sentence exactly 7 characters shorter.


Ask a followup question

Loading...