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Hi! Let's make this sentence sound a little different in two easy ways. First, we look at the main parts: the time (summer), the animals (mosquitoes), the action (gather), and the picture words (cloud-like droves). Then we pick simpler words that mean the same thing.

  1. Time: "In summer" can also be "During the summer".
  2. Action: "gather" can be changed to "come out" or "swarm".
  3. Picture: "cloud-like droves" can become "cloud-like groups" or "like little clouds" so it sounds clearer.

Here are two rephrased sentences:

  • 1) "During the summer, mosquitoes come out in big, cloud-like groups."
  • 2) "In summer, mosquitoes fly around like little clouds."

Try saying each one out loud. Which picture do you like better — "big, cloud-like groups" or "little clouds"? You can change the words again depending on the picture you want to make in someone's head.


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