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Correct sentence (simple): Reindeer use their sharp, hard hooves to dig moss out from under the ice.

Why this is better (step by step):

  • Subject and verb: "Reindeer use" is correct because "reindeer" is plural and matches the verb "use."
  • Adjectives: "sharp" and "hard" both describe the hooves. When two adjectives describe the same noun and are equal, put a comma between them: "sharp, hard hooves."
  • Word order: "dig moss out from under the ice" sounds natural. You can also say "dig out moss from under the ice." Both are correct.
  • Possessive word: "their" correctly shows the hooves belong to the reindeer.

Other simple ways to say it:

  • "Reindeer use their strong hooves to dig moss out from under the ice."
  • "Reindeer dig moss from under the ice with their strong hooves."

Nice job—your original sentence was almost perfect. Adding the comma and choosing small word changes makes it read a bit more smoothly.


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