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Corrected sentences:

  • At uni, I played in a rock band and painted.
  • More formal: At university, I played in a rock band and did some painting.

Brief explanation:

  1. Capitalize the first word: 'At' should be uppercase.
  2. 'Uni' is informal; use 'university' in formal writing.
  3. The comma after the introductory phrase is optional but fine: 'At uni, ...'.
  4. 'Painted' is grammatically fine, but you can add an object or rephrase for clarity (for example, 'did some painting' or 'painted pictures/painted paintings' if you want to specify what you painted).
  5. An exclamation mark is acceptable if you want an excited tone; use a period for a neutral statement.

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