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Original: When I was younger, I played in a rock band and painted!

Corrected (natural): When I was younger, I played in a rock band and painted.

Other clear alternatives:

  • When I was younger, I used to play in a rock band and paint.
  • When I was younger, I played in a rock band and painted pictures.

Explanation:

  • The original sentence is grammatically acceptable: the verbs are parallel and both in the past tense.
  • Consider removing the exclamation mark unless you want an emphatic or excited tone; a period is more neutral.
  • If you want to be more specific, add an object to "painted" (for example, "painted pictures" or "painted murals").

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