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Here are three playful ways to say that sentence for a 7-year-old. I kept the words short, added fun sounds, and made the action quick so each line is easy to picture.

  1. When the hare's big ears hear a scare, it zooms away — boing!
  2. As soon as its floppy ears catch a spooky sound, the hare hops off like a spring.
  3. The moment its huge ears go 'psst', the hare jumps up and races away.

How I changed it (step by step):

  1. Used simple words a 7-year-old knows (big, floppy, zooms).
  2. Added fun sounds (boing, psst) to make it playful.
  3. Kept the action short and speedy so it's easy to imagine.

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