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How I changed the title (easy steps)

  1. Find the important ideas: new, out now, novelties (things that are new and fun).

  2. Pick words that mean the same but do not use 'toys' — for example: arrivals, finds, picks, novelties, fun.

  3. Make short, bright titles a kid would like.

Three rephrased catalogue titles (no "toys")

  1. Fresh Finds — New Novelties Out Now
    Short and excited: says there are new fun things to discover.
  2. Fun Finds — New Arrivals Today
    Friendly and easy to read; tells people new items arrived today.
  3. Latest Novelties — Hot Picks Out Now
    Gives a feeling of excitement and that these are the best new items.

If you want, I can make them shorter, sillier, or more formal — tell me which style you like!


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