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Rephrase: Crows would love the new harvest, if not for the scarecrow.

Why it works (easy steps):

  1. I used "would love" instead of "would be happy to try" — fewer words and more playful.
  2. I kept the scarecrow part so the meaning stays the same.
  3. Original had 13 words; the new sentence has 11 words — two words shorter!

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