Good try! Here are easy steps to make the sentence correct and sound natural.
- Always start with a capital letter: The first word should be "The" not "the".
- Put a full stop at the end: Add a period "." so the sentence finishes.
- Choose the right word instead of "along": "Along" sounds odd here. Use "beside" or say "while" to show two actions happening at the same time.
Simple corrected sentences you can use:
- The chicks peep beside the hen.
- The chicks peep beside the pecking hen.
- The chicks peep while the hen pecks.
Pick the one you like! If you want, try saying the sentence out loud and I can help you pick the best one.