Corrected sentence (simple):
A cable car can take you up the mountain very quickly and easily.
Or, if you like the word "zoom":
A cable car can zoom you up the mountain very fast and very easily.
Step-by-step explanation (easy words)
- Fix the repeat: You wrote "up up" twice. We only need one "up."
- Start with a big letter and end with a dot: The first letter (A) should be a capital. Put a period at the end.
- Use the right word form: After action words like "take" or "zoom," use adverbs. "Easy" is an adjective (describes a thing), but we need the adverb "easily" to describe how something is done. "Fast" can work as an adverb ("run fast" is okay), but "easy" must become "easily."
Quick examples
- He runs fast. (fast can be used here)
- The test was easy. (easy describes the test)
- He finished the test easily. (easily describes how he finished it)
Try this
Fix this sentence like you did above: "The bus drove me up up the hill super quick and super easy."
Answer: The bus drove me up the hill very quickly and very easily. (or: The bus drove me up the hill very fast and very easily.)
Great job! Keep practicing reading your sentence out loud — it helps you hear extra words and missing punctuation.