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Corrected sentence (simple): Airplanes fly far and very high to avoid bad weather and busy times.

Another natural version: Airplanes fly long distances at very high heights to avoid bad weather.

Why this is better (easy words):

  • We keep "Airplanes fly" because that is correct.
  • We add "and" or say "very high" so it sounds clear: "far and very high."
  • We use "to avoid" instead of "avoiding" so it clearly tells why they fly high (they want to stay away from bad weather).
  • "Rush hours" is about cars on the road. Saying "busy times" is simpler for a child. If you meant roads, say "rush-hour traffic."

If you want it even shorter: "Airplanes fly very high to stay above bad weather."


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