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Correct sentence:

When tiny bits in the air tickle the nerves inside your nose, the nerves send signals to your brain. That's how you smell.

Why this is better (in simple steps):strong>

  • We added a comma after the first idea so the sentence is clearer.
  • We named the subject of the second part, "the nerves," so you know who is sending the signals.
  • We split it into two short parts so it is easier to read and understand.

If you want it even shorter: "Tiny bits in the air tickle nerves in your nose. The nerves tell your brain, and you smell."


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